Wednesday, October 16

• We looked at a student essay and gave the writer feedback.
  
• We chose one essay to revise, eliminating all cliches and vague statements. It is very important to keep up with the workshops! 

FOR THURSDAY:

• Be prepared to read (aloud) one of your essays to a small group. This should be free of cliches and vague statements! 
  
• Be sure to read this article, which includes this week's words, and to create three sentences that use a colon.
  

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